Talk:Alyssa Miller

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Ethically Yours (talk · contribs) 06:41, 21 December 2013 (UTC) I'll be reviewing this article for GA. Ethically ^(Yours) 06:41, 21 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Most of the article is in compliance with WP:MOS in general. Article is short; though not a requirement; if it is expanded it'd be better. A few notes though:

Lead[edit]

"She is currently in a relationship with Jake Gyllenhaal". Although ref is provided in the fourth para it'd be good if you can link one here.
- This article uses the fully uncited WP:LEAD format. All content in the LEAD is cited elsewhere in the article.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:56, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Career[edit]

4th paragraph, 1st line has no period. Please put that in place.
- done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:58, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Personal life[edit]

Expansion would be preferred to include more details.
- Based on recent google searches, this is all the encyclopedic content out there at this time.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:59, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

Reference number 10 (this) doesn't seem to work for me. Provide another source.
- removed.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 01:16, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Everything okay. I pass this article to GA status. Ethically ^(Yours) 07:31, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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