Talk:Al Khadra Mabrook

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Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 18:20, 13 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Lajmmoore (talk). Self-nominated at 08:28, 27 September 2020 (UTC).[reply]

  • This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:31, 29 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks very much @Cwmhiraeth: Lajmmoore (talk) 21:17, 29 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but this hook tells us nothing about the subject, and assumes we'll get excited about her granddaughter, about whom most people know nothing either. Could you suggest a different hook angle please? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 14:37, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for the feedback, how about?
ALT1 ... that the Sahrawi refugee poet Al Khadra has written poems intended to inspire military revolution, including criticism of the Moroccan Western Sahara Wall? Source:https://thequietus.com/articles/18800-verfreundungseffekt-saharawi-refugee-camps-poetry-translation (Lajmmoore (talk) 08:54, 12 October 2020 (UTC))[reply]

Death date[edit]

@Tidjani Saleh kindly added a death date for Al Khadra, referencing this tweet made on 15 October 2021, however the tweet (translated to English) doesn't say the actual date that they died, so I've put a broader October 2021 in the article and changed the year to 2021. I looked for other sources, to verify the infomation but couldn't find one. I am leaving this note as explanation. Lajmmoore (talk) 05:57, 14 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Perfect, thanks! I will try to find a source later (this was covered in Sahrawi media, but they don't archive news that well), but this is old news and I was a bit surprised to see they weren't covered. The source is very trustworthy in my opinion, so I also changed the birth date to the one that the tweet from Aziza Brahim claims. Tidjani Saleh (talk) 18:44, 14 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]