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Cerro Panizos

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Nominator(s): Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 07:12, 16 May 2024 (UTC)

This article is about a not-quite shield volcano in Argentina. It is not a particularly remarkable volcano, other than the fact that it was discovered from space imagery and that it is a large volcano in the wider Altiplano-Puna volcanic complex. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 07:12, 16 May 2024 (UTC)

Image review

• File:LandsatLook_Viewer_Cerro_Panizos_ignimbrite_shield.png: source link is dead. Nikkimaria (talk) 05:15, 18 May 2024 (UTC)

Replaced link, although I don't remember which options I chose on the webpage to find the image. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 06:07, 18 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

Non-expert prose review.

• No concerns about the prose. I made minor edits to the article: feel free to revert.
• In the "Sources", Mazzoni, Mario M. (1989) and Vaquer, José María; Eguia, Luciana; Carreras, Jesica (2018) have titles in all caps, which per MOS:ALLCAPS should be in sentence case.

  Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 06:40, 25 May 2024 (UTC)

• Infobox checked and no concerns.

Lede check:

• "Subduction of the Nazca Plate beneath the South American Plate" is said in the lede, but I think the article body says that the subduction is under South America, with no mention of it being a plate. Should this be more explicit in the body, maybe wikilinked in the body?

  Put "South America" instead. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 06:40, 25 May 2024 (UTC)

• In the lede: "The formation of the APVC has been linked to the existence of a giant magmatic body in the crust of the Andes." From what I gather from the body, this magmatic body is the Altiplano-Puna Magma Body. Should this be wikilinked in the lede? And should the lede specify that the body is in the Central Andies (and not underneath the whole thing?)

  Implemented. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 06:40, 25 May 2024 (UTC)

Those are my comments. Please ping when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 01:18, 25 May 2024 (UTC)

Support. My concerns have been resolved. Z1720 (talk) 15:06, 25 May 2024 (UTC)