Talk:Evarcha praeclara

Evarcha praeclara is currently a Biology and medicine good article nominee. Nominated by simongraham (talk) at 01:10, 5 May 2024 (UTC)

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Short description: Species of spider

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Evarcha praeclara/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 01:10, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Relativity (talk · contribs) 02:10, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Simongraham: Hey, I'll be reviewing this against the good article criteria. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to ping me here or contact me on my talk page. ‍Relativity ⚡️ 02:10, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvios check[edit]

29.1% on Earwig's, and it doesn't have to do with anything really in the text. I'll hold off on clearing this criteria until I do the source spot check.

Source spot check[edit]

Jason A. Dunlop's source—
Christian Kropf and Theo Blick's source—
Wayne P. Maddison's 2015 source—
Jerzy Prószyński's 2017 source—
The World Spider Catalog Source—
Daniela C. Rößler, Massimo De Agrò, Elia Biundo, and Paul S. Shamble's source—
Konrad Wiśniewski's source—

Image check[edit]

This shouldn't take too long... File:Evarcha michailovi female (cropped).jpg—

Comments[edit]

Still working on adding more, but feel free to address these if you'd like...

Lead— examples found may may be a— "may may"?
Lead— The African male spiders and Asian female spiders— wait, I'm confused. So, are these both from the same species? Do the African spiders live in Africa and do the Asian spiders live in Asia?
Lead— The spider's copulatory organs are distinctive.— distinctive in what way?
Taxonomy— which had first circumscribed by— add "been" after "had"
Taxonomy— There are some duplicate links in this section, namely the links to species, Eugène Simon, and Jerzy Prószyński. I recommend using this tool to highlight duplicate links.
Taxonomy— It is closely related to the genera Hyllus and Plexippus. and Analysis of protein-coding genes showed it— what is? The spider? The clade Saltafresia? There were many, many things before that sentence, and I'm not sure what it's referring to.
Description— is a small, light-coloured spider The spider's body is— Add a period after the first "spider"