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Your submission at Articles for creation: Javier Zaruski (December 12)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrowssapSMM was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Needs more independent, secondary sources.

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DrowssapSMM 14:49, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi, where you able to review this article? thank you Medianextgen (talk) 23:27, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Javier Zaruski[edit]

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Medianextgen (talk) 23:38, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

User:Medianextgen ^^ thetechie@enwiki: ~/talk/ $ 23:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm guessing that you are looking for help with your draft. Being a professional and a world champion in just about any sport should translate into meeting notability criteria.

Your draft, however, exhibits several very bad problems that are preventing it from being accepted.

Number one is the apparent copying from one of your sources, https://www.bjjheroes.com/bjj-fighters/javier-zaruski

You have copied multiple sentences verbatim. And since BJJ Fighters is a copyrighted site, that copying will have to be addressed by removal from the history.

Number two is the problem of promotional or at least non-neutral language in the draft. Your writing makes it clear you admire this fighter, but Wikipedia should not be seen as having that point of view - it must remain neutral, and so must your writing.

The other issue is one I won't be able to fully address here. Do your sources establish Zaruski is notable, according to Wikipedia's criteria. I see that you are using lots of sources, some of the multiple times (hint: see WP:NAMEDREFS for how to handle this) and in some cases piling up 3 or more references for a single statement. Most of the time, a statement should be supported by a single source; it's fairly rare where two would be needed. Any time I see three or more footnotes ganged together, it's a sign that you're likely doing something wrong. I question whether BFF Heroes as a site is able to support notability, even if we grant that it hosts reliable stats for the sport. You cannot copy their bio - you need to base your biography on independent reporting about him. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 01:22, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank yo so much for your detailed feedback! I will address this issues and get back to you Medianextgen (talk) 17:29, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Javier Zaruski (May 4)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Javier Zaruski and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 16:07, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]