Talk:Fusajiro Yamauchi
Fusajiro Yamauchi is currently a Video games good article nominee. Nominated by Maxime12346 (talk) at 09:51, 7 May 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: Japanese entrepreneur (1859–1940) |
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Can anyone find any evidence/citation of his remians being entombed in Nintendo's headquarters? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.175.93.30 (talk) 21:46, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
NINTENDO — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.200.190.218 (talk) 15:33, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
Sources used for GA nomination.[edit]
The following books were read online :
The Story of Nintendo : https://books.google.be/books?id=M-pGHGDm5a4C&redir_esc=y (Google Books)
Game Over, Press Start to Continue: How Nintendo Conquered the World : https://archive.org/details/0966961706/mode/2up Maxime12346
Nintendo: The Company and Its Founders : https://archive.org/details/nintendocompanyi0000fire/mode/2up
(talk) 19:56, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
GA Review[edit]
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Nominator: DanganMachin (talk · contribs) 09:51, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: NatwonTSG2 (talk · contribs) 19:52, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello @DanganMachin I decided to review this article because it looks pretty simple and easy so. This article seems a handful of fixes to be addressed.
Lead[edit]
- For the infobox, not much other than the fact that you're unable find sources for his unnamed daughter and the cause of his death. I think this source might help a bit.
- In the first sentence, you could change who founded Yamauchi Nintendo, the company now known as Nintendo into who founded Yamauchi Nintendo, later known as Nintendo.
Before Nintendo[edit]
- Shouldn't this section's title be renamed into Early life.
- P2: Could this section be one entire paragraph and you could removed the additional reference there.
Personal details[edit]
- S1: With no son into Without a son
- S4: change claim into claimed
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