Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Peer review/Fight Club (film)

Fight Club (film)[edit]

I aspire to see this film article reach FA status. I've improved it enormously to be well-rounded in terms of production information and themes. I'd like suggestions about if anything needs to be added or trimmed for anything in the Production section, as well as any clear-ups needed for the Themes section. Also, is the Reception section comprehensive enough, or does there need to be more coverage about the film? Are the references used satisfactory? Are the external links and the literature in "Further reading" appropriate? Answers to these questions as well as any other critical observations are welcome. —Erik (talk • contrib • review) - 18:40, 28 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Looks real good to meWhataboutbob 18:56, 9 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

'Comment - The article looks great, much better than when I saw it several months ago. You could mention that the film (well really the book) also spawned a video game, Fight Club (video game). Furthermore, I've seen some Featured articles (ex Final Fantasy XII) to verify certain plot details by citing scenes from the movie. That's about it, keep up the excellent work! --ShadowJester07 ► Talk 22:08, 17 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Lenin and McCarthy[edit]

Just a few things I saw.

In production, perhaps specify the "Bite fight" rather than just link to Mike Tyson. And maybe change "big breasts" to "large breasts".
A citation may be needed for the narrator being named "Jack" in the script. And someone might even want the page number for when the narrator is in the asylum.

And maybe a few more of the aticles in references should be linked, if possible. --Lenin and McCarthy | (Complain here) 22:39, 28 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I revised the wiki-link about the bite to lead to The Bite Fight, but piped it to say, "Mike Tyson's act" to make it directly clear without having to visit the wiki-link to understand.
The Empire citation for the aliases also applies to "Jack" being in the script.
I'll try to find the page number for the mental asylum, though I don't have the book available to me right now.
A number of the references used for the film article came from magazines. However, they've been made available online (illegally, I believe) here, so I hesitated to wiki-link to them. Any suggestions about that?

Keep the tips coming! :) —Erik (talk • contrib • review) - 22:48, 28 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Support All the ingredients for a GA -good work! ♦ Sir Blofeld ♦ ^{"Expecting you" Contribs} 12:05, 12 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]