Talk:Ray Thorburn (artist)

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Feedback from New Page Review process[edit]

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks very much for creating this page about Thorburn. There is an element of WP:OVERQUOTING; you could consider summarising or paraphrasing quotations a bit more, to make the style more encyclopediac. But overall, great contribution to Wikipedia, and thanks again!

Chocmilk03 (talk) 23:10, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]