Talk:Natalya Neidhart/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:36, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:36, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Take your time. I probably won't be able to respond to your comments until Saturday at the earliest. NiciVampireHeart 21:49, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ok; It'll be another day or two before I get this reviewed, so it works on my end. Had to wrap up a bunch of abandoned reviews, just about done with that. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:56, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"to form The Hart Dynasty. and moved to the SmackDown brand." first period's wrong.
Fixed. NiciVampireHeart 18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"In late 2000 through to 2001," through or to could be removed.
Removed "to". NiciVampireHeart 18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"making her the first third generation female wrestler in the history of WWE." it's a bit redundant, since you mention she was the first one period several sections up.
Removed. NiciVampireHeart 18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"she was also involved a feud" in a feud
Fixed. NiciVampireHeart 18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"she is cousin " a cousin
Fixed. NiciVampireHeart 18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Everything else looks fine, so I'll put the article on hold and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:14, 24 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Everything taken care of. Thanks again for the review. NiciVampireHeart 18:29, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good now, so the GA passes. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:34, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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